“Just keep swimming , just keep swimming, just keep swimming swimming swimming” said the fish So I just keep going , just keep going, just keep going going going., ,but is it enough ? Because I feel like I’m going nowhere Just deeper deeper deeper into the abyss
Creative Writing II/Creative Writing II Honors 
This is very short and I feel like if you developed it more and put more of a plot into it, it would be better. There are some punctuation problems, too. I like what you’re going for but it just needs some work. 🙂